wordsmithing

Revision as of 14 August 2013 at 01:26.
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What is the relationship between the professor and the company? If there is a link, it should be made explicit. Otherwise, I agree with ggcooke that other applications should be included, the professor not named, but you could mention it led to a nobel prize.

Also, please add commas before the non-restrictive "which" clauses.

    Allisonmarsh01:26, 14 August 2013