Emergence of TFT-LCD Display Technology
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I am convinced that this proposed IEEE Milestone is appropriate recognition of the emergent TFT-LCD Display Technology 25 years ago. It addressed the need for large flat screen displays and the need to move away from CRT displays for ecological reasons as well as display quality reasons. However, I feel the proposal would benefit greatly from editing to improve the representation of the technology to both reasonably informed engineers and technologists and the general public which might enjoy museum like exposure to this technology that has had an almost certainly positive impact in their lives.
I too feel editing is needed: What does TFT mean? The writing is very much overdone with too much editorializing- "breathtaking", "vacillating companies" "major-league status" don't belong in the citation. The comments above on the RCA work have to be addressed as well.