Special:Badtitle/NS90:Milestone-Proposal talk:The 20 inch Diameter Photomultiplier Tubes/wordsmithing
From ETHW
What is the relationship between the professor and the company? If there is a link, it should be made explicit. Otherwise, I agree with ggcooke that other applications should be included, the professor not named, but you could mention it led to a nobel prize.
Also, please add commas before the non-restrictive "which" clauses.
