my initial comments
Hello Toshihisa Funabashi; Meidensha Corporation.
Thankyou for providing the additional supporting documentation suggested by Ted, and could I kindly ask if you can update the reference to the 'Canadian Power Company' to reflect the corrected entity. Not being familair with North America utilities, it was not something I checked in my initial review.
The other comments are duly noted, and I think with the Canadian reference update, there should be no impediments to have this ready for the Committe review.
David Burger (firstname.lastname@example.org)